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Re: hm. well.
:) Hey! You check to see if your characters' have been listed in the Mary-Sue hate sites? Wow! And I thought I was the only one *insane paranoid twitch*
Well, I can honestly say that I don't believe your character is a COMPLETE Mary-Sue (I could go into detail about how your character isn’t, y’know, amazingly beautiful/brave/angsty/mysterious/sueish) , and yes, your style is writing is a little disjointed, but that’s just your style. You definitely have the potential to improve, so I do hope you continue to write :D
Besides… the whole electric mandolin thing you’ve got going? Sheer fricken genius, dude ;p
:) Hey! You check to see if your characters' have been listed in the Mary-Sue hate sites? Wow! And I thought I was the only one *insane paranoid twitch*
Well, I can honestly say that I don't believe your character is a COMPLETE Mary-Sue (I could go into detail about how your character isn’t, y’know, amazingly beautiful/brave/angsty/mysterious/sueish)
Besides… the whole electric mandolin thing you’ve got going? Sheer fricken genius, dude ;p