| anunspiritedsue ( |
On the plus side, the technical aspects of the fic - grammar, etc. - weren't too bad.
On the other hand, those technical aspects were used to angst endlessly until I was about ready to punch my fist through the computer. Good Lord, Vash is angsty enough (or has cause enough for much angsting) for every character in the bloody series and he manages to put on a happy face, real or not, frequently.
But I know! Their tru wuff will unite both their sad angsty hearts and there will be neither sadness nor angsting between the two of them! </bad>
On the other hand, those technical aspects were used to angst endlessly until I was about ready to punch my fist through the computer. Good Lord, Vash is angsty enough (or has cause enough for much angsting) for every character in the bloody series and he manages to put on a happy face, real or not, frequently.
But I know! Their tru wuff will unite both their sad angsty hearts and there will be neither sadness nor angsting between the two of them! </bad>